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04:38查看AI文稿AI文稿同学们大家好，我们来继续更新二零二二年新高考二卷的最后一个题，语法填空。好，我们看一下。 henry tyler made the catch of the year on the weekend。 啊，这个 h t 是吧？这周末这里面 made cat 呢，就是成功的接住或抓住 发生什么事情的了呢？ when he saw a young child hanging from the sixth floor apartment， balcony he ran one hundred meters jumped over a one point， two meter fans and held out his arms to catch the full child。 他看到一个小男孩，嗯，挂在了这个六楼的阳台上，然后他跑了一百米，跳过了一个一点二米高的围栏，伸出了他的双臂去接住了 这个什么孩子。好，我们看中间缺形容词对不对？那么这里面同学注意了啊，这个是孩子，和这个 for 之间有什么关系？是孩子们正在坠落，能懂吗？所以答案呢？应该表示进行的状态是 folly f a l i n g。 有很多同学还添了否冷，对吧？如果是否冷的话呢？表示被动或完成就这个孩子掉下去了，那他能接住吗？所以只能添否冷。 好，我们看三十七题。后面是 brown family live in apartment， 就是布朗一家人住在这个公寓，很明显，他这个横线处只能填一个定管词，是特指布朗一家人，所以应该填的。然后这个的同学们一定要大写， okay， 这个 好，然后我们继续看一下三十八题。 they both fail 什么 while watching tv？ 那就是他们已经睡着了，所以这个 sleep 呢？要变成形容词形式， a steep， a s， l， e， e p。 我没学过这个短语，对吧？叫 fall asleep， 进入睡眠的状态。好，我们继续看三十九题， he pushed a chair onto the balcony and climb up 什么系的？ 然后呢，他就搬到了一个椅子在阳台上，并且爬上去的目的是去看他们，所以呢，强调目的，答案应该是 to see 好。四十题，然 黑什么啊？ sleep fail and a sleep and fail over the edge。 他不小心滑到了对不对？所以呢，应该是考瓷砖，把这个形词变成副词，就是加上 l y， 我就这样简写了好吧， accidentally 好。四十一题， he hang on for a few minutes。 然后什么 screamed for his father 好？没有给出提示词，考虑带关连接，前面说的是他是挂在上面几分钟，然后后面是在对他的父亲尖叫。明显前后这两个动作应该填连词 and 好。四十二题， henry 什么 his car， when he heard the screams。 他给出动词 fix 叫修理，当他听到呼喊的时候， henry 怎么样？ 正在修他的车。考时态语态就是正在修理，而后面是 heard。 所以呢，应该是过去进行时用 word fixing what's fixing？ 好，我们再看四十三题， he quickly throw his tools aside and started started running arms out。 他怎么样啊？就把工具扔在了旁边，并且马上就跑了出去。 好，我们看那后面这个 started 提示是多句式，所以前面呢，当然也是变了过去式，词肉呢，属于特殊变化变成词肉 t h r e w 好。四十四题， he said my 他救了我儿 儿子的命。所以呢，应该后面加上 ps， 考的是，呃，形容词性物主代词对吧？就是名词随有格， sorry， 名词随有格，他儿子的命。最后 i don't know 我不知道什么 to thank him 怎么样，感谢他。 how to thank him？ 好，我觉得这道题很简单了，是吧？同学们听懂了吗？ see you next time 拜拜。
23:06查看AI文稿AI文稿这是二零二三年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科听力部分。 jack are you going camping with your friends this weekend it depends if it's sunny will go the weatherman says it's going to rain in that case we'll go to the cinema instead， excuse me could you mind my bags for a moment i want to buy some food at the convenience store no problem but be quick it was enhanced that my train would arrive in ten minutes bob came out of hospital last friday have you got a chance to visit him i plan to see him this saturday aren't you going to the conference？ then， no， it has been rescheduled for next monday sorry， miss， we made a terrible mistake adding up the bill here is the ten dollars we have to return to you， oh， i didn't notice that it's okay don't blame the waiter he's been really nice do you think we should get steve a book for the new year books are good but steve wouldn't take just any book he has to have this particular one on geography hello sarah， hello david， i can't come for dinner tonight， sorry， oh， what happened we've got a new case and things get pretty crazy here in the office well， then， i'll come to you， no， no， not tonight let me see if i can arrange another night sarah， please we need to talk it's about my job then tell me on the phone no， it's better if we do it in person how about tomorrow night i'm not sure you can give me a call tomorrow afternoon okay hello sarah， hello david， i can't come for dinner tonight， sorry， oh， what happened we've got a new case and things get pretty crazy here in the office well， then， i'll come to you no， no not tonight let me see if i can arrange another night sarah， please we need to talk it's about my job then tell me on the phone no it's better if we do it in person how about tomorrow night i'm not sure you can give me a call tomorrow afternoon okay， jim will call an us this afternoon do you know where he is now uh wait let me see he has sent two messages saying that he's done with his work at the office and got a taxi， and and he'll arrive in twenty minutes we can't keep him waiting outside our home we have to hurry， but it takes at least half an hour to get out of the city centre by bus look at the traffic let's get off we can say at least twenty minutes by walking through the park are you sure yes， a hundred percent jim will call on us this afternoon do you know where he is now uh wait let me see he has sent two messages saying that he's done with his work at the office and got a taxi， and and he'll arrive in twenty minutes we can't keep him waiting outside our home we have to hurry， but it takes at least half an hour to get out of the city centre by bus look at the traffic let's get off we can save at least twenty minutes by walking through the park are you sure yes， a hundred percent morning mark morning clara how was your weekend great i went to my grandpa's he invited us to pick vegetables on his farm my daughter had a great time there what about you oh， i had a truly incredible experience i dropped by a yard sale on saturday and got several books novels， a novel and two poetry collections as i leaved through the novel a piece of paper fell out it was an air ticket from two thousand and twelve the flight was from los angeles to chicago and the name on the ticket was ashley lewis was it yes， ashley， my sister in two thousand and twelve she lived in los angeles and her husband worked in chicago both of them often flew between the two cities i asked the cellar where he got the book， he said it was bought at a second hand bookstore in los angeles three years ago last year， he and his family moved from los angeles to philadelphia， so all the way across the country your sister's old book landed in your hands that's really crazy morning， mark， morning clara， how was your weekend great i went to my grandpa's he invited us to pick vegetables on his farm my daughter had a great time there what about you oh， i had a truly incredible experience i dropped by a yard sale on saturday and got several books novels， a novel and two poetry collections as i leaved through the novel a piece of paper fell out it was an air ticket from two thousand and twelve the flight was from los angeles to chicago and the name on the ticket was ashley lewis was it yes， ashley， my sister in two thousand and twelve she lived in los angeles and her husband worked in chicago both of them often flew between the two cities i asked the seller where he got the book， he said it was bought at a second hand bookstore in los angeles three years ago last year， he and his family moved from los angeles to philadelphia， so all the way across the country your sister's old book landed in your hands that's really crazy victor you've been here in indiana for six weeks now how are you feeling i think i've got used to college life going to classes working out and hanging out with my friends though there's pressure to meet deadlines life here is never boring what's been hard about being an indiana basketball player well， the training is very competitive wait lifting and running every day it's not like high school in high school i really didn't have to do that i'm just trying to get used to it and i think i am at this point how do you see yourself fitting into this group？ i think we are all different george is from britain， chris and leo are from australia i'm from france and the rest are americans but i get along with everybody you know we are really starting to bond it's great to see how we grow each day as a team thanks victor， i wish you a very happy and fruitful stay in indiana victor， you've been here in indiana for six weeks now how are you feeling i think i've got used to college life going to classes working at and hanging out with my friends though this pressure to meet deadlines life here is never boring what's been hard about being an indiana basketball player well， the training is very competitive weight lifting and running every day it's not like high school in high school i really didn't have to do that i'm just trying to get used to it and i think i am at this point how do you see yourself fitting into this group？ i think we are all different george is from britain， chris and leo are from australia i'm from france and the rest are americans but i get along with everybody you know we are really starting to bond it's great to see how we grow each day as a team thanks victor i wish you a very happy fruitful stay in indiana good evening dear listeners when was the last time you enjoyed leisure activities do you want to live a full and happy life today， i am going to introduce to you a magazine that features the art of living the idler was launched by tom hokkenson back in nineteen ninety three with the intention of providing a bit of fun， freedom and a achievement in a busy world it is now published by monthly in every issue， you'll find an interesting mix of interviews and essays on the good life history， philosophy arts and fashion photography you'll find much to laugh at and much useful stuff as well from recipes for making bacon， two guides， two housekeeping if you've ever felt that there's more to life than boring jobs then why not subscribe to it the idler is a cheering read that makes you feel better about life you can download the application and subscribe today to get your first issue free good evening dear listeners when was the last time you enjoyed leisure activities do you want to live a full and happy life today， i am going to introduce to you a magazine that features the art of living the idler was launched by tom hokkenson back in nineteen ninety three with the intention of providing a bit of fun， freedom and achievement in a busy world it is now published by monthly in every issue， you'll find an interesting mix of interviews and essays on the good life history， philosophy arts and fashion photography you'll find much to laugh at and much useful stuff as well from recipes for making bacon， two guides， two housekeeping if you've ever felt that there's more to life than boring jobs then why not subscribe to it the idler is a cheering read that makes you feel better about life you can download the application and subscribe today to get your first issue free。 第二节到此结束。 jack are you going camping with your friends this weekend it depends if it's sunny we'll go the weatherman says it's going to rain in that case we'll go to the cinema instead， excuse me could you mind my bags for a moment i want to buy some food at the convenience store no problem but be quick it was enhanced that my train would arrive in ten minutes bob came out of hospital last friday have you got a chance to visit him i plan to see him this saturday aren't you going to the conference then no it has been rescheduled for next monday sorry， miss we made a terrible mistake adding up the bill here is the ten dollars we have to return to you oh， i didn't notice that it's okay don't blame the waiter he's been really nice do you think we should get steve a book for the new year books are good but steve wouldn't take just any book he has to have this particular one on geography hello sarah hello david i can't come for dinner tonight sorry， oh， what happened we've got a new case and things get pretty crazy here in the office well， then i'll come to you no， no not tonight let me see if i can arrange another night sarah， please we need to talk it's about my job then tell me on the phone no， it's better if we do it in person how about tomorrow night i'm not sure you can give me a call tomorrow afternoon okay jim will call on us this afternoon do you know where he is now uh wait let me see he has sent two messages saying that he's done with his work at the office and got a taxi， and and he'll arrive in twenty minutes we can't keep him waiting outside our home we have to hurry， but it takes at least half an hour to get out of the city centre by bus look at the traffic let's get off we can save at least twenty minutes by walking through the park are you sure yes， a hundred percent morning， mark， morning clara how was your weekend great i went to my grandpa's he invited us to pick vegetables on his farm my daughter had a great time there what about you oh， i had a truly incredible experience i dropped by a yard sale on saturday and got several books novels， a novel and two poetry collections as i leaved through the novel a piece of paper fell out it was an air ticket from two thousand and twelve the flight was from los angeles to chicago and the name on the ticket was ashley lewis was it yes， ashley my sister in two thousand and twelve she lived in los angeles and her husband worked in chicago both of them often flew between the two cities i asked the seller where he got the book he said it was bought at a second hand bookstore in los angeles three years ago last year， he and his family moved from los angeles to philadelphia so all the way across the country your sister's old book landed in your hands that's really crazy victor you've been here in indiana for six weeks now， how are you feeling？ i think i've got used to college life going to classes working at and hanging out with my friends though this pressure to meet deadlines life here is never boring what's been hard about being an indiana basketball player well， the training is very competitive wait lifting and running every day it's not like high school in high school i really didn't have to do that i'm just trying to get used to it and i think i am at this point how do you see yourself fitting into the group？ i think we are all different george is from britain， chris and leo are from australia i'm from france and the rest are americans but i get along with everybody you know we are really starting to bond it's great to see how we grow each day as a team thanks victor i wish you a very happy and fruitful stay in indiana good evening dear listeners when was the last time you enjoyed leisure activities do you want to live a full and happy life today， i am going to introduce to you a magazine that features the art of living the idler was launched by tom hoakenson back in nineteen ninety three with the intention of providing a bit of fun freedom and achievement in a busy world it is now published by monthly in every issue， you'll find an interesting mix of interviews and essays on the good life history， philosophy， arts and fashion photography you'll find much to laugh at and much useful stuff as well from recipes for making bacon， two guides two housekeeping if you've ever felt that there's more to life than boring jobs then why not subscribe to it the idler is a cheering read that makes you feel better about life you can download the application and subscribe today to get your first issue free。
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09:04查看AI文稿AI文稿二零二三高考英语新高考二卷应用文分析哈喽，各位礼华们大家好，现在是二零二三年六月八号晚上的七点半，我来第一时间给大家做一个今年高考英语新高考二卷应用文的作文分析。 我是怎么这么快拿到题的呢？那是因为我的孩子今年参加高考，所以我让他一出考场就赶快把今年的英文作文题目给我写下来，我第一时间进行分析来和大家进行分享。 那么今年的作文题目是，假如你是李华，你的英语外交 ryan 准备将学生分为两人一组，在课后练习英语口语。 你觉得这样的分组存在问题，请写一封信，内容包括，一、提出存在的问题。二、改正的建议。我不知道大家在考场当中面对这样的一个问题 题是怎么进行思考的，那么我接下来分享一下我个人的观点。我首先说明的是，这只代表我个人的观点，答案并非唯一，一定还存在着各种各样正确的解题思路。 那么我首先分析一下这个题目的难点在哪里？这个题目的难点是在外教的安排中存在的问题是什么？两人一组练口语，他怎么了？我们要把这个问题想明白才可以。 我觉得这个问题思考的重点要落在两人一组的分组这个方式上，以下我要举三个我认为比较可行的方向，当然我再重申一遍，还有各种各样可以说的过去的方向 啊。我只是列举三个我是个人认为比较能够把重点落在两人一组分组这个方式上 面的三种可行的方向。第一，在只有两个人的小组中，在交流中，学生们的观点和思路会有限， 话题没法得到充分的展开，会导致对话总在低层次的水平停留。那么这一句话，这个观点我们把它用英文表达出来就是， in a small group with only two people students viewpoints and ideas are limited making it difficult for topics to be thoroughly explored which will resort in conversations thing at a low level。 好，这是第一个。那么第二个， 学生们在口语练习中只有一个固定的伙伴。交流会限制他们接触不同人的机会，从而无法接触到不同的口音和思维方式的学生，这限制了他们语言的发展。 你看，这个方面也是把落点落在两人一组的分组上，只有两个人，所以说会产生各种各样的问题， 那么他的英文表达是， but engaging in oral practice with only one fixed partner students are restricted from interacting with different individuals which limits their exposure to various accents and thinking styles thereby slowing their language development。 第三，在两人一组的情况下，如果一个学生与一个由于懒惰或缺乏动机而不太积极参与练习的伙伴配对的话，结果会是灾难性的。 in a two person group sighting if a student is paired with a partner who is not act actively involved in the practice because of laziness or a lack of motivation the result would be a disaster。 好，这个最重要的问题如果能够解决的话，那我们接下来要从整个文章的角度上来看一看还有哪些需要思考的问题？ 那么第二写信目的，这是第一自然段的第二句，我们的写信目的往往是 i'm writing to do something。 开头，那么对于这篇文章，他给的内容背景是你的英语外交 ryan 准备将学生分为两人一组，在课后练习英语口语，你觉得这样分组存在了问题， 这就是我写信的目的，我写信的目的其实就是为了表达我对这种分组的想法啊，这个想法肯定是感觉不太好， 感觉不太好，所以说我在这里边把这个想法换成了 concern， 那么这句话可以写成 i'm writing to express my concern about the grouping method， you have planned for our english speaking practice of the class。 把整个这些信息写在第一段的第二句当中，我表达的是一种担忧。关于什么呢？关于你的分组方法的担忧啊，这个你这个分组方法是为了我们的英语 啊，口语的练习在课后，所以把这些修饰全都提取出来，放在第一段的第二句，在整个写信目的的这句话当中把它表达出来。那么接下来第三，也就是第二自然段的主体部分，就是这个问题是什么？这一个部分是需要自己想的，我们刚刚已经说过， 这部分是一个难点啊，我刚才提出了三个想法，大家可以参考。第四建议，建议我们别的句型，无非也就是 my suggestion is to do something， what i want to suggest is to do something， why not do something。 类似这样的建议，但是都没有具体的内容，所以这篇文章的建议要基于问题来写。你的问题提的是什么？你的建议就要基于这个，就要基于解决这个问题的这个方向来进行题。 好，第五就是文章的第三阶段来表达你的希望。我们这么认真的思考提出的建议当然是希望对方能够和好，很好的去呃，思考一下，最好是能够帮上忙，能够帮助外教想出更好的方法，或者是采纳 直接采纳我的方法来把我们这个口语练习的效果进行提升。好， 那么我们根据这五个方面写的三个诊断，就可以是以下的这篇文章。 好，我来读一下。 dear ryan， i'm lihua， one of your students in class one i'm writing to express my concern about the grouping method you have planned for our english speaking practice after class i believe that the current pairing of two students together may pose a problem， but engaging in oral practice with only one fixed partner students are restricted from interacting with different individuals which limits their exposure to various accents and thinking styles based on the concern my suggestion is to put full students in a group providing them with better opportunities to interact with different people in english thank you for your attention to this matter and i hope my suggestion will be helpful your sincerely lihua 好，在这篇文章当中，我把上面提到的那些要点当中的句子组合在一起，同时加了一些连接的结构，使它变得更完整。 那么整个这篇文章是一百一十五字啊，一百一十五字。我们的作文要求小作文要求是八十字，但是其实考场上啊，判卷的老师是希望你能 写到一百字以上的，一百一十五字可能稍微有点多啊，大家可以酌情的在进行删解一些东西，但是我们写的稍微多一些，证明我们表达能力会更强一些，只要我们的空格是能够写下的，稍微多写一些，老师其实是欢迎的。 好，我们来总结一下，本篇作文对于审题能力的要求其实是有所增加的，大家刚才经过的分析应该是能看出来，首先就是需要自己思考的问题， 这是有点难度的，很容易想偏，如果你的落点不在二人一组这个角度上，就很容易写偏题， 那么第二个难点就是这篇文章的要点二，建议部分也需要自己想。这在以前的作文中是很少出现这种情况的，以前的作文是两个要点 当中只有一个是需要自己想的，另外一个他会直接给你写出来，然后你按照他写的方向去进行翻译就好了。而这篇文章是问题要你自己想要点啊，不是建议也需要你自己想， 而问题一旦想偏了的话，建议自然也就偏了，所以整体上来讲，这篇文章对于主要内容的要求难度是有所提升的。 好了，以上就是我对这篇作文题目的一些粗浅的认识，和大家交流，大家如果有什么更好的想法，或者或者你在考场上更加精彩的发挥，可以在评论区中相互交流。那么等读后续写的题目出来之后，我再和大家分享我对今年读后续写的一些看法，大家敬请期待。
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16:21查看AI文稿AI文稿二零二三高考英语读后续写分析哈喽，大家好，终于找到题了，我们现在来分析一下二零二三年高考英语新高考二卷的读后续写。 今年的读后续写呢，难度算是中等，他遵循了全国卷的特点，那就是帮你做好限制，不容易写跑题，但同时也不容易写出彩。 你的文章如果想力压群雄得高分的话，那么就在读的时候在短文中找到足够的可以进行回扣的关键信息，使得文章前后照应形成一个完美的闭环，这样才能够在以内容为王的读后续写的这个题目当中得到批卷老师的青睐。 那么接下来我会从读后续和写三个方面依次来分析一下今年的考。 首先从读的角度上来看，这篇文章有几个句子不容易理解，我都用红色标出来了。首先就是这里引用了两个典故，一个是第一自然段的关于泰坦尼克号的沉默， the thinking of the titanic。 另外一个就是第三阶段的 like 星顿事件，一七七五年的 like 星顿， 这个是美国独立战争啊，引起美国独立战争的一七七五年的莱克星顿的枪声事件啊。这对于学历史的文科同学来讲 是有先天优势的，他们有着更多的背景知识，能够更好地利用这些信息，但是就算不认识的话，其实也不至于让你写跑题，所以这两个点并不能决定你的成败，但是确实能够提供更多可以用来写作的游戏 有效信息。好，我来简单分析下这两句关于泰坦尼克号的沉默，这里边是因为我不喜欢写作嘛，对吧？我的英语是我的第二语言，我不喜欢写作，所以说写作老师呢，他允许我去展示我的论文，注意这的 paper 是论文以及我写的文章， 关于这个介词，论语是关于什么的论文？关于的 thinking of titanic。 哦，我们这 titanic 鞋体了，大家在读文章当中一定要注意鞋体的单词，它一定是名字，对吧？你认真看，这 titanic 是有可能想起来的。泰坦尼克的泰坦尼克号的沉默。 好，怎么呢？怎么展示呢？通过把它演出来，演一个戏剧，把它演出来，你不不愿意写吗？那你就把它演出来好了。然后威尔定语从句，在这个戏剧当中，我扮演所有的角色。 好，接下来没有人笑的比他笑的更厉害。这意味着什么？这意味着这个主人公。对于这个这个剧啊，他编的确实是很有趣，也也同时意味着这个老师，他能够欣赏到主人公的这个幽默。 okay， 这是第一个典故，第二个典故， paul revere， 它是一个 silver， smith 是一个银匠。 他在波士顿啊，在波士顿，他骑着一匹马，在晚上，在一七七五年四月十八号的晚上，去莱克星顿去警告人们，英国士兵来了， 这就是我们历史上有名的事件，莱克星顿的枪声，他通知了英国士兵，那么莱克星顿的英国民兵就有效的组织了对于英国军队的一个反击，在那打响了美国 独立战争的第一枪。这是两个历史典故，那么另外两个比较难理解的句子就是第二自然段出现的我标红的这句话。在这句话当中的 apply 就是本意是申请的意思，如果你愿意 apply yourself， 自己去申请的话， 那么接下来的一个难点是 have a good shot， 字面意思是有着一个很好的射击， 有着一个很好的射击 short， 可以表示足球的射门有着一个很好的射门，那么这里表达的意思是有很大的希望。如果你愿意自己申请的，也 申请的话，那么我认为你这一次有很大的希望。这里表示老师对于主人公的一个认可好。那么第三个不太好理解的表达， 就是最底下他所给出的第二自然段的首句当中的 the award presentation。 很多同学可能不认识这单词，不认识这个单词他的意思是什么？是颁奖，也就是颁奖典礼的意思， 如果这个两个词不认识的话，他确实会对你的续写内容产生影响，你能不能读懂，就决定了你会不会看出第一站段的最后应该写的是我参加了颁奖典礼， 所以说这个表达如果不认识的话，他确实是比较致命的，它属于是关键位置的关键词，不认识的话，对于 读这篇文章的同学来讲，你可能就会写其他的事情，而不会写颁奖典礼了。所以说对于备考的同学来讲，积累单词去提升理解能力，使我们的水 任务。另外在我们读短文的过程当中，还需要做的是找到在续写文章当中可以用来照音的细节，我在这里用横线把它们标注了出来，比如说第一句所出现的 writing contest， 一个写作的比赛， 这里边没有说这个写作比赛的规模的大小，可大可小，这个是在我们文章当中我们可以自行决定的，那么其余的画线部分，在文中的赵英，我会在讲范文的时候一一进行讲解。 那么在读完这个题之后，我们需要确定的是这篇文章的主要人物是两个，一个是我，一个是我的 social studies teacher， 我的社会调研老师。那么这篇故事他需要解决的一个问题就是我一定得得奖，而且还得得大奖， 这也就是意味着我的写作能力是一定要获得认可的。那么从另一个角度上看，从价值观的角度上来看，需要解决的一个问题就是我应该认识到老师对我的帮助，可以是从老师的嘴里 说出来，他一切安排的用意，也可以从我的嘴里说出来，表达出我对老师帮助的感激，以及对于写作的热爱 好。以上是关于读的部分的分析，那么接下来关于后续这两个字，我们需要思考的是所给出的两个自然段的手句。其中我们通过第二自然段的手句 i went to my teacher's office after the award presentation。 我们可以得知我从颁奖典礼回来了，那么第一段一定是我去颁奖典礼了， 所以第一阶段的第一句是我收到了消息，最后一句是我在颁奖典礼上获奖，那么中间的几句话就应该是消息的内容，我的惊讶以及我参加颁奖典礼和我的获奖。 第二自然段的首句是我在颁奖典礼之后去了老师的办公室，那么接下来发生的理应是办公室里边所发生的一些事情，对吧？办公室里边都发生了什么，老师很明显一定会对我进行祝贺， 然后就是老师解释他这么做的用意，或者是我表达对于老师的感激，以及我会继续把写作这件事情做好的一个决心。那么确定了这两个自然段中的写作内容，我们需要做的就是 在句子和句子之间把衔接做好，使得整个我们所写出来的文本读起来非常的通顺就可以了。最后就是落实到写，下面我来分享一下我个人所写出的一篇序。写，我要声明这不是官方范文，更不是很多知名机构 当中很多老师在一起研究出来的一个权威的版本，这只是我个人的想法，大家可以听听我的分析是否有道理。 首先第一句， i received a letter stating that i had won the writing contest。 这对应的是我收到了消息，收这个消息的形式是我收到了一封信， 告诉我我赢得了这个 writing contest， 把这个 contest 前文提到这个词，把它表达出来。那么我收到这封信之后，自然要写我 个人的感受。那么我一定是惊讶，我睁大了眼睛，难以置信的睁大了眼睛。 as i read the words that illuminated the page before me。 当我读这些文字，这些文字接下来修辞，他使得整个这页纸在我面前都熠熠生辉。为什么？因为这些文字我实在是太喜欢了。 然后接下来就没有必要继续再写这一课的信息了，因为这一段我们需要写的内容很多。接下来 two days later。 两天之后， 然后伴随着我的心情是一股快乐的这种涌动在我的血管当中产生了涟漪， 也就是表示的是什么？我非常的高兴我参加了这个 the award。 presentation 这个词一定要表达出来，然后定语从句， 他充满了兴奋与期待。好，我去参加了。然后接下来就是参加时候， as my name was called。 当我的名字被叫的时候， i walked up to the stage。 我走上了台。走上台干嘛？去 领奖？ receiving the top award。 这里把 award 加个形容词啊，头奖，最高的奖项 and praise， 以及夸奖和赞扬。为什么会收到这些东西呢？是因为 how imaginative and humorous my icy walls。 这里用 ic 是因为 文章的最后一个自然段，作者对自己的文章的称呼就是 ic。 那么这里用 imaginative 有想象力的原因是什么呢？我们去照应前面文章当中的信息。有想象力照应的是我写 的内容，因为我整个故事都是直接来自于马的嘴。大家看对这句话没？ 就是这个故事是以马的口文写出来的。这当然是有想象力了，对不对？有想象力，而且还很幽默，很幽默。翻脸，然后别的人是不可能想到的。这些都在意味着我写的这篇文章非常的具有想象力。 那么幽默体现在哪里呢？首先从第一自然段，我在演泰坦尼克号的沉默的时候，老师笑的最大声能看出来我很幽默。 再一个，最后一个暂断，我这文章写完了之后，我老师读完这之后，他笑得很大声，也能表示我很幽默，对吧？好，这些信息能够表示出 imaginative 和 humorous 存在的意义。下一个暂断，我去了老师办公室，在颁奖典礼之后， when he saw me his face lit up with pride。 他看到我的时候，他的脸也怎么样，自豪地高兴地 亮了起来啊，叫人逢喜事精神爽，脸都会发光。那种感觉表示的是他看到我时候的感觉，他也很高兴。然后他一定会祝贺我， after congratulating me on my achievement。 在祝贺了我取得的成就之后， 然后他做的具体动作，他拍了拍我的肩膀，对吧？老师对于学生的鼓励是可以通过拍肩膀这个动作来表达出来的。然后轻柔的告诉我，接下来我所选择的方向就是老师来讲述他的用意。我在 你的那个泰坦尼克号的沉默的那个剧当中就看到了你讲故事的天赋。注意，这里边是对应上文，对应上文的什么呢？第一，自然段中泰坦尼克号沉默的 qq 句 啊，讲故事的天分是什么呢？在这里。第二，暂断 i love your stories。 我喜欢你的故事，所以说，也就是从这个文章可以看出作者的天赋啊， 因为英语是他第二语言吗？他的天赋不是语言天赋，是讲故事。一个作家最重要的天赋其实不是自己啊，使用文字的能力，而是自己讲故事的能力。就比如说刘慈新的三体，他这个故事吸引了全球的人，而不是他的语言。 好，接下来 you just didn't believe you could do something great with your second language。 你的第二语言啊，你只是不相信你没有信心你能够用你的第二语言去做一些伟大的事情。这个对应的就是第一阶段的英语是我的第二语言啊，写作特别难 写，作者们，还有第二阶段的他为什么一定要让我做一些注定失败的东西呢？都是你不相信，你没有信心去用你的第二语言去做一些事情。 所以说， i was pretty sure。 我把这句话写成了插入成分啊，两个逗号隔开。我非常确信你所需要的是一个机会， 这个机会去干嘛呢？能使你像 reverse horse 一样去奔跑起来的这样的机会。这个去赵英原文中他所写的那个内容，莱克星顿的枪声里边，他所写的那个角色 revere 这个银将所骑的马，整个故事生活， 马的嘴里边所讲出来的。然后第四阶段，他也想了，马在那边跑的时候，他累不累？他有没有疑问，他是否想想要退出呢？我立刻就产生了共情。 sympathize 的啊，我立刻就产生了共情。你要看不出这个词，其实后边也能看出来，因为对应的是我很累， 对应他累不累？我产生了疑问，对应，他是否有疑问我想要退出？对应他是否想退出，对不对？我 在写这篇文章的时候，和那匹马面对的情况是一模一样的，但是 revere 的马他坚持了下去，我就也得坚持下去。 所以说在这篇文章中，我其实就是那匹马，那匹马获得了成功，成功的到达了莱克星顿，通知了当地的民兵，那么我的坚持也会取得了成功。所以说我在这篇， 我在这个我的文章获得了大奖，对吧？然后最后一个点题，很明显， you both made it。 你们俩都做到了，你们俩都做到了。 所以说可以看出这是老师的初衷，就是制造一个机会，让孩子认识到他在讲故事方面的才能和写作方面的才能，这就是教书育人最珍贵的点的所在，对人进行启发，激励他去获得自己所擅长方面的成功， 能把这篇文章的主题引到老师对人的教诲这个方面，然后收尾，这是我个人的一个想法。当然，这篇文章的第二自然段也可以作者说一些话 啊，因为我们文章的最后，他强调了我开始喜欢上写作了，我已经不在乎能不能得奖了，写作已经成为我的爱好了，那么作者就可以来表达 老师的帮助对他的影响，以及许诺自己会把写作这件事继续做下去。也就是第二阶段，我们还可以这么写，我很感激。对于他的引导和鼓励，我很感激，因为他起了至关重要的作用，在帮助我发现我对写作的热情方面 起到了至关重要的作用，那么这次的成就也这次成功，他激励着我继续写作的旅途，带着坚定和热情。 好，这可以是另外一个结局。那么除了这两个结局呢？这篇文章一定还有很多其他的写作方向。大家可能不知道，在高考批卷的时候，批卷老师手里是没有所谓的参考范文的， 他们手里只有评分细则，而他们能做的就是按照评分细则去分析你的卷子。因为在批卷的 时候，如果手里有参考范文，那么范文的写作方向会极大的限制皮卷老师的思维，所以老师会以一个开放的态度去面对所有可能的故事情节，只要不是太离谱，相信是不会算你跑题的。 好，这就是我对今年续写的一个分析，大家有什么想法呢？可以在评论区交流。那么这两天我看到很多同学在问啊，这套题的 c 篇文章和 d 篇文章上面这些问题，那么我有时间的时候会做一个 c 篇 d 篇的讲解，大家敬请期待。
